Forbidden Love

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    Forbidden Love

    Will she ever be the one?
    Is this temporary?
    Does she love me enough to
    Elope so we can marry?

    Her parents don't like me much
    That is why I'm stressing
    I sincerely was hoping 
    That I'd get their blessing

    I love her with all my heart
    From most, I've kept this hidden
    Not that I'm ashamed of her
    But that it's forbidden

    We have a forbidden love
    No one wants us to wed
    They say we should take more time
    And just stay friends instead

    Is it me, or is it them?
    Some have turned up their nose
    To the very idea
    That I will propose

    I believe that I'm ready
    I've waited all my life
    For the moment when she'll say
    That she will be my wife

    I want to do the right thing
    Who cares what others say?
    I cannot please everyone
    I'll do this my own way

    They all hope we won't elope
    What is it that they hate
    About us, why make a fuss?
    I'll simply have to wait

    We have a forbidden love
    Maybe someday we'll be
    Together forever in
    Holy matrimony

    Should I wait and compensate?
    Try to turn them around?
    It's important to me that
    We're all on common ground 

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    SuperDan commented on Forbidden Love

    02-04-2012

    extremely beautiful poem written. i must say from a dudes stand point young man that the parents will NEVER be satisfied with who you are. what matters is just you and her. DONT EVER LET FAMILY STEP IN THE WAY OF THIS! Family is important granted, but one thing that lasts longer than family is a love and i mean A TRUE LOVE THAT ONE HAS FOR ANOTHER! Keep your head up

    schizopoet

    02/05/2012

    Hello Dan, Thank you very much for taking the time to read and rate this poem. If you like this one, maybe you will like my other 280+ poems. LOL. Thank you for your advice about what really matters. Take care.

    am2anangel commented on Forbidden Love

    01-28-2012

    beautiful write and dedication. You can't always please everyone. You and she are the ones that count. Grab your dreams and never let go. well done once again. -Tonya

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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