A Note of Sorts

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    This came about after listening to Ministry's version of the song, 'Rehab', by Amy Winehouse. Somehow, I don't think their version was what she had in mind...

    A Note of Sorts

    Straight from rehab
    hailed a cab
    watching the streaming world
    ever changing
    a cacophony of complaints
    rain smeared laments
    garbage strewn cement
    out the back window,
    watching it all go down

    Extended dog's paws
    clenched jaws
    a welcoming of claws
    greeting him home again
    otherwise,
    does it come as a surprise?
    the house is as empty
    as good intentions

    But wait!
    There is unfortunately more:
    character assassinations
    broken dinner plates
    the finest of china
    ground to dust
    beneath steel toe boots
    a note of sorts
    reality aborted
    darkness courted

    In touch with nothing
    subconsciously
    on another field day
    to just reach out
    and connect with another
    from some time and place
    able to read the trembling stone
    of his beautifully troubled face
    to experience urgent heated emotions
    beneath tempered skin,
    not to let this emptiness win

    mathiasthom
    written 10/14/10

     

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    arronpalmer commented on A Note of Sorts

    10-15-2010

    Fantastic imagery. Love the short, sharpness of the lines, really conveys the panic/short-breathedness of a drug addiction. Like this.
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    mathiasthom

    10/15/2010

    thanks for reading.

    gregster commented on A Note of Sorts

    10-15-2010

    this is interesting..the emptiness is of drugs sorrow or life itself i suppose...but in fact it is well written and just great.nice job
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    mathiasthom

    10/15/2010

    thanks for commenting!

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