S.O.S

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    The picture displayed is my own photography ^^

    and about the poem, I was really just in the mood to write and this happened to come about ^^

    S.O.S

     Feed it through,
    Pull it out,
    Hope it scars
    Cover with false
    Smiles,
    Close your eyes
    Just to savor
    The lingering pain
    Avoid the talking
    Swallow the once
    Singing pride
    Spiral down, reach
    For that pin
    Throw it in the
    Air,
    S.O.S
    Nobody's home,
    Try again later
    Sink deeper,
    The water's far to
    High now
    S.O.S
    Throw up that flag
    Wave around
    Far to deep to
    Be saved now
    How I long,
    Now that I'm far
    To gone,
    How I long,
    To be like those
    Birds, flying
    High above the waters
    I'm drowning in
    S.O.S
    Save my soul,
    For God can't hear
    Me Anymore
    Somebody save me
    Before it's too late
    Somebody jump into
    These calm waters
    Somebody..
    Anybody...
    ~Kaitlin Platti~

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    wheelsal commented on S.O.S

    08-07-2009

    The fear of drowning and you told it well. Hope this isn't your life story. Sally
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    Platti

    08/07/2009

    Thank you Sally! and sadly, sometimes it is lol

    StandingBear commented on S.O.S

    08-07-2009

    I'm swimming through the calm waters when i spy a young lady slowly drowning. Twice she's went down already, luckily i've my homemade raft in tow. The 3rd time she goes under, i arrive just in the nick of time to dive deep .. reaching to feel her tangled hair wrap around my hand. I pull her to the raft and she's safe. Great write.
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    Platti

    08/07/2009

    lol thanks SB! :D

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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