Final Good bye

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  • Final Good Bye.

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    life is to short to gamble with so before you walk away
    make sure you say your sorry, make sure you say good bye
    and do not leave your loved ones without joy in the eye.
    once it is over you can not go back
    to tell them you are sorry or that you love them back
    so every chance you see them make sure that they know
    that if you have to leave them, you leave them in love.

    ...For no man knoweth the hour of which the lord shall come.

    Final Good bye

     The car drove past
    through the puddle with a splash
    past the lonley girl with a tear drop on her lash
    the old man did not see her
    he was a drunken mess
    didn't see how much she need to feel his caress
     Instead he drove on faster
    never mind the horrid pain
    he simply had left her standing there
    crying in the rain.
    He never even turned around, he never even stopped
    to say his last good byes, just hurried to his truck.
    he laid down on the hammer, then came the erie sigh
    as the girl stood in dismay of watching her father die.

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    kareemrocks3 commented on Final Good bye

    11-26-2009

    awwwwwww that must have been scary to see i can imagine the pain u went through
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    Tarlton009

    12/02/2009

    it is not a true story it is for a lesson, never leave those you love without telling them you love them because never know how much something is worth until you loose it.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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