A Father's Love

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my inspiration came form the poem footsteps and my own father's love.

A Father's Love

I once heard a story, a story of a man
who went out every morning to make footprints in the sand

every day he walked in the same exact line
evey though the tide would wash it all and leave nothing behind
he walked back and forth for hours everyday
but no matter how he tried they always washed away

then one day I asked him why he walked this way
and wasted his time each and everyday

we walked for a while along the sea side
until the man grew tired and sat down with a sigh
then as we sat there resting by the sea
the old man turned and this he said to me

I get up every morning at the break of dawn
and walk along this shore line until the day is gone
because I'm getting older and my children have moved on
and I know that some day soon I'll have to leave them on their own

so everyday I get up and walk this stretch of shore
so that when I'm gone they can be sure
that when they had to much and the world is cold as stone
they can follow my foot steps and find their way back home.

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Tarlton009 commented on A Father's Love

01-10-2011

wrote for my dad, the best in the world. also reflects on how God loves us, never giving up even if it seems impossible.

Derico commented on A Father's Love

09-14-2009

Good rhythm, and the nessage is clear about A Father's Love. Good work, great writing!

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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Proof of angels 1
This thing called love. 0
Wave walker 0
Renewed by grace 0
what good is it 0
Mr. Sun 1
Billy Bob ( my sweet companion) 1
Restoration 0
But God 3
Raging war 0
Peace be still 0
Midnight blue 1
Don't let go 0
I'm (not) all alone 0
where are you (my love) 0
sweet talker 1
Burning heart 0
Anything 0
come my love 0
Wishing star ( dream lover) 0
The end is near 0
Heave's Song 0
the Peace keeper 0
Heart burn 0
Let it rain ( consuming fire) 0
Morning light 0
Islands in the Sun 0
Carol of the carols 0
Winter's joy 0
Swaying trees 0
Alone 0
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Wish come true 0
For better or worse 1
Blooming (the season of love) 1
come together 0
Fiesta 0
Heavenly Gates 0
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The Crossroads 0
In the Light 0
So light it up 0
Autumn 0
Good night 0
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Adieu 0
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Paper cup 2
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my friends 0
Torn 0
By and by 0
I'm not who I was 1
An instatne 0
Golden rain 2
Dream on 1
Good Night my love 1
Broken Sky 1
Heaven 1
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Break the chains 0
Golden Shores 2
Dirty window. 0
Dear Mr. President 0
Deep inside the dark 0
All the quittance 0
Not repeats 0
Beyond the sea 0
The Midnight cry 0
My soul to keep 1
Heaven's Rain 1
Night weaver 0
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Nevermore 1
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why do I love you 1
three simple words 0
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Forever Love. 0
breaking the glass 0
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looking at you through the glass 2
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don't leave me. 1
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six feet above 0
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Christmas star 1
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What the? 1
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Final Good bye 1
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Stay Forever 3