On number of occasions

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On number of occasion I was kissed by elders There were cousin brothers and sisters

On number of occasions

On number of occasion I was kissed by elders

There were cousin brothers and sisters

They will pick me and raise above ground

I was the only object for them to be found

 

They will call me by pet name

I will feel let down with shame

Even though it was freely used by all

I did not like it and did not answer by that call

 

Some of the beautiful girls too would come close and tease

They will try to play with me and make me feel at ease

Such family events were organized at good intervals

It was quite fun and amusement on all members’ arrival

 

I was notorious and give them some worry

I will touch dust and dirt and later on say sorry

They will not mind and rather pick me only to kiss on forehead

I was their favorite as little master and walked before them or ahead

 

I tried to understand the feeling behind such lovely kisses

I would rub of the cheeks as soon as they would finish

I was forcefully made to surrender to their wishes

They would then turn their attention to the sweet dishes

 

Such powerful gathering can be found only in family occasions

All are cordially invited to be the part of the memorable functions

It could be marriage anniversary, birth day or some wedding

It will be with great fun fare and in mood of completely celebrating

 

In this atmosphere I missed mother’s kisses and affection

She had altogether different approach with mild action

She will pick and take me among the relatives

I will enjoy later on and mix among all with love

 

It was not because she was mother hence I missed

It was different approach and way that she kissed

She had nothing to show her love to anybody

It was for all to see and judge as I was not somebody

 

Small kids are always centre of attraction

They are liked for their way of talking and manner less action

I was small kid in comparison with all 

I was getting attention as they will push me for fall

 

Mother would watch me from the distance

She will always keep me before her eyes or presence

She will take full care to see that I am not harmed by anybody

She will often ask and indicate to daddy

 

As I was always loved by family and relatives

I too paid full respect later as they deserved

They had high hope in me for their future

I was too little to understand that time for sure 

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Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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