Emotional farewell

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I see the same trees, people and environment Nothing has changed and required no comment I only had undergone some considerable change I was now trained man as soldier and not teenage

Emotional farewell

I stepped out from my railway coach
I was in hurry and wanted to reach
I was abinitio with forces and returning home
I thought all will be waiting for me to welcome

It was first national call to join the forces
People responded well to be seen in dresses
It was honor to be defended at by any means
We never intended to dismember other country or tried to win

I recall those turbulent days when nationalism was at its peak
Everybody wanted to defend the country with emphatic speak
I decided to go in with no other thought in mind
The future course left for later on to find

The day before mother was worried and restless
She had cried so much and was seen on the face
She had all the pride to take for my action
But unknown fear was reflected on face as reaction

I had deep emotional farewell
They expected me al the good luck with wishes so well
I had emotional burst and wanted to tell
My throat was choked and I had only sadness to feel

Even today service to motherland is considered noble
People come to your help if seen in trouble
This shows deep and high regard for serving man
As person has well dignified to attract the fans

I thought many aspects and came back to old memory
How all thought I will be unsafe and felt so sorry!
I was considered to be on risky mission
But my mom remained like with nom confusion

I bowed my head for her in respect
She was all for me to support in any act
I looked back and found her like rock
She was almost there with energy and stock

I see the same trees, people and environment
Nothing has changed and required no comment
I only had undergone some considerable change
I was now trained man as soldier and not teenage

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jadia4708au commented on Emotional farewell

05-30-2011

Nice recollections! Your first stanza shows as if you have come back, and the rest of the stanzas looks as if you are taking leave of your family. In any case, the sentiments are clear. Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad…May 30, 2011 Ashraful Musaddeq excellent piece 10 hours ago • Like

jadia4708au commented on Emotional farewell

05-30-2011

Vern Taylor Hasmukh said that words just invade his mind. That has happened to me too. Let me know if you have experienced this also? ... Because of that thought, I wrote about it so: .......................................................................... ................. ..... There are words that come to me invading my mind Some poems are written in another place and time And by God's great love and His great spirit I have received much wisdom that I did not merit.

jadia4708au commented on Emotional farewell

05-30-2011

Wise advice contained here my friend. on No one cares From Patrick McFarland 30 May N

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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