Entering new day

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    Many more birthdays may approach We may be celebrating them as such What do we remember specially on that day? Keep me among my brethrens and not push away

    Entering new day

    As usual I am entering new day in life

    Everybody is wishing me but first was wife

    She held my hand in gratitude

    As I had remained with her with great magnitude

     

    Today candles are lighted

    Many achievements are highlighted

    Some of my hay days and nice moments

    Lovely chance to hear and read comments

     

    Child days are sweet and memorable

    Taken care of by parents and made capable

    This was all needed for strong foundation

    As every child needs care with lovely relation

     

    As the days pass by you know about the people around

    Your aspirations and upcoming days to look sound

    All efforts to come out as successful man

    And of course to need a wife as beautiful woman

     

    I remember standing before mirror for several hours

    Dreaming about girl to play part in coming years

    To pass off the life as shining example

    As so many reminded me of life as only a bubble

     

    Life has flowed like water in river

    Rushing towards goal but not sure or never

    Sometimes disappearing in between without trace

    Some of that kind feared to occur and to be faced

     

    As always seen, God is always kind to all

    Responds to your prayers and attends the call

    Everything is given liberally without judging your acts

    Only we fail to recognize it as divine gift in fact

     

    In fact we must be grieving for past year

    In many cases we have refused unpleasant things to hear

    We have forgotten those old days which were made to bear

    Otherwise life was so cruel on us to force eyes with tears

     

    It is reminder to us not to shed tears but to stand fast

    Thank God earnestly that he made us forget it at last

    Now today we are better off and enjoying the fruit

    The path is open with happiness and powerful delight

     

    Many more birthdays may approach

    We may be celebrating them as such

    What do we remember specially on that day?

    Keep me among my brethrens and not push away

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    jadia4708au commented on Entering new day

    05-18-2011

    s it Armageddon? Is this just the time has come? No! No ! No ! Soul coming out! thank very nice poem *(*-*)*

    jadia4708au commented on Entering new day

    05-17-2011

    Dina Ali Thank you and Happy Birthday to you, my sweet FRIEND

    jadia4708au commented on Entering new day

    05-17-2011

    LB. Vishaarad Thank you Hasmukh ji for sharing so considerable poem! I WISH HAPPY BIRTH-DAY TO YOU DEAR FRIEND! With best compliments and Love, - LB. Vishãrad «

    jadia4708au commented on Entering new day

    05-17-2011

    « Delete » ڰڿ ♥ ڰڿ danuta thanks for the lovely poem and here is my comment we're going to liberate their hearts we're going to liberate their hearts we demand could run andrenaliny we're going to be realized the power of ............

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