Ask about mother

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Even almighty owe their place in her womb We all do a curse on her by destroying her dreams with bombs

Ask about mother

No man would hesitate to lay down live?

If he really thinks of motherland and believes

What else can be holier than earth?

Everything else can be secondary even the death

 

Ask any mother of what she thinks of holy land?

Would she ever stop her sons from going on field by hand?

Will she hold them back for the sake of her own safety?

She will not as she has been considered as holy and equal to deity

 

What else she will do and witness?

How many more deaths to see and face?

What her inner soul may react?

These are all unanswered questions and acts

 

War does not spare any one

The territory is annexed and amnesty to none

Daughters, sisters and mothers raped for no reason

No sensible human being may like it as reasonable person

 

What is to follow later on the scene?

The plight, misery and poverty totally unseen

How many years it may take to reconstruct?

Where as it may take only seconds to destruct

 

You ask any mother for her comment

She may not utter a word but only lament

How can she prefer to be pregnant again?

When she has to accept total loss as gain

 

Even though sacrificed children for noble cause

There may be vacuum in life with little pause

Who will come in night and wipe the tears?

She has to spent sleepless nights and bear

 

That is how we rate the mother

Who can compete with her?

Let all deities come on earth and perform

The role played buy mother in any form

 

I would salute to mother first

The pray to God last

Even almighty owe their place in her womb

We all do a curse on her by destroying her dreams with bombs

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jadia4708au commented on Ask about mother

07-10-2011

Melvina Germain Well I'm a mother and I feel we can solve issues of the world in peace and at no time, in any place do I condone the act of war. The soldiers sent off as peaceful beings, sons and daughters of loving families, moms and dads of children left behind. These people come back to us tarnished with life long pain. What they see and do, we will never know, their heartache and pain we can not share but as mom's we will always be there to comfort and try to heal but the goodness, the love, the dignity, the trust and hope war is most cases did steal. As a loving mother, there is no time that I could sacrifice my children, I would rather stand in the front line and die for their safety. We solve nothing with wars. We teach our children that peace and love is the answer and then we send them off to war to be disfigured, to be brain washed, to be ripped of their dignity and to die. Where are the role models of peace and love. We can not use mothers to favor wars because in our wombs we nurture and keep safe our babies, we do not prepare them to fight needless wars. Mothers should never be used as a symbol in favor of the darkness of guns and fire but yet the light of peace and love, that's what we should always stand for. We are the bearers of life, not the bearers of death.

jadia4708au commented on Ask about mother

07-10-2011

Date & Time: 7/10/2011 6:22:00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 27492109 - Ask any mother Member: Jim Troy Comment: A person does themselves a favor to lean back and clear the mind and read this very deeply considerate work. It is far from merely surface consideration for it wants the whole picture revealed. A very worthy piece of work for mankind to reflect upon for the good of everyone.... Thank you for sharing your beautiful spiritual unbilical cord.............. Jim Troy

jadia4708au commented on Ask about mother

07-10-2011

jadia4708au » amor sem par Very Nice Poem, Thanks Send message | Deletejadia4708au 6 hours ago « Delete » ♪ ♥♥NiTaH@GaU.. Lovelyyy poemm..thanks sir Hasmukh.. Send message | Deletejadia4708au heidi andrea .. sweet lovely poem Send message | Deletejadia4708au 58 minutes ago « Delete » Swarnapali Mu.. A wonderful poem about "mom" , the most sweetest woman on Earth, the kindest heart among all.

jadia4708au commented on Ask about mother

07-08-2011

amarela very beautiful....kissssssssssssss..i lost my beloved Mother and also my father.....in the car accident... so many year*s ago...i was so young...only 20 y*rs old...and still miss my LOVELY PARENTS..every day.

jadia4708au commented on Ask about mother

07-08-2011

Poem: 27492109 - Ask any mother Member: Unwritten Soul Comment: I love this poem, it's a great emotion for whole people..but i will love God first as He sent a mother to care me with love and gentle smiles...and He will listen every prayer i make for mother so He cares to make us eternally happy (mom and children) _Unwritten Soul

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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