Delusion
Delusion
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StandingBear commented on Delusion
01-12-2011
- TP, there certainly are those whom enjoy twisting their tales and spewing their *self-made laws* on others for their own unfathomable reasons no one wishes to acknowledge understanding. Always there exists a balance without one even having to lift a finger....SBear
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01/13/2011
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devaamido commented on Delusion
12-19-2010
- Tender: This is truly a powerhouse of poetic expression! I love it!! This goes into my "short-list". Thanks!!
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12/19/2010
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12-13-2010
- Your pen is so intense with the truth and the pain you feel, you have been lashing out for some time now, may your road find the destination that your heart seeks, be well k
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12-07-2010
- Fooling ourselves. Yes that does happen on occasion. The metaphor isn't too deep and rhyming is a little rough and forced sounding in stanza 2 but most of it rides well for me. A poet friend// RH Peat
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HarverTomsson commented on Delusion
11-23-2010
- Like feeding a puppy out of sorts, loving you leads to a tangible mess. Speak Fifi, speak! Your poetry is irresistible. But I craved one more syllable in your finale, so I swapped damned for cur-sed and let out a sigh of relief. Fave line? Spin whole cloth from webs of lies. I wish I'd written that. Harv
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