dark temptation

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  • Dark Poetry

    dark temptation
    is it ultimately self-absorption
    that sets the pen to page
    inscribing self-delusion
    in a voice of bitter rage

    poor me I'm such a victim
    to some others wicked game
    I'm hurting and I'm fucked up
    but down deep I know it's lame

    we say we take our mask off
    but it's just another layer
    truth is a subjective game
    and I'm an adept player

    we're seeking understanding
    but all that I can find
    is the same old tired story
    it's the blind leading the blind

    the darkness is enthralling
    a muse bereft of light
    inspiring self-deception
    and a twisted sick insight

    so be careful who you listen to
    be careful what you believe
    the dark, though sweet and tempting
    will do nothing but deceive

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    JCKasper commented on dark temptation

    09-20-2009

    A truth thus spoken ...... Easy to be consumed, by the dark side of life........ Speaking words of wisdom with the energy to fight! Evoking connections with poetic insight!
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    Artie commented on dark temptation

    07-18-2009

    I like the message here, it shows real insight. 10 from me.
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    Phoenix9 commented on dark temptation

    07-11-2009

    we live in the dark, we find the most inspiration in the dark for we can turn it into the light of understanding through our verse, which flows from every pore andevery thiught, well done.
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    laydbak1 commented on dark temptation

    07-11-2009

    The force is always strong on the dark side... I enjoy your control and bittersweet flowing wit.... A very good write here girl....
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    wheelsal commented on dark temptation

    07-08-2009

    You have spoken of the dark with so many and so well. You poetry splices through with strong visions of this place. Another great write.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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