Haiku # 5 Lineage

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    Haiku # 5 Lineage


    Within Her Glade Lie
    Tomorrows Hopes and New Dreams
    Such love deep within


    Written by
    Asha & angelchaser
    2010©

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    Olan01 commented on Haiku # 5 Lineage

    08-31-2010

    As you know I write haiku from time to time and this is excellent.
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    ApaqRasgirl

    08/31/2010

    thank you very much for that nice compliment, these are some of the first I have written, I found out how much fun they are to write and did almost 40 some in two days, I love them......some of the ones I am doing now are joined ones with another poet angelchaser or BrittKun, if they are you will see there names on them along with mine,,,,,,,,,angel loves to write them as well so the two of us have been challenging each other to complete one that the other has started......Britt is a young poet whom I got interested in writing Haiku's and taught her how to write one and she is having fun with them now.........thanks for the sweet comment..........loves ya asha

    Olan01

    08/31/2010

    They are easy to write and quite satisfying to the soul. The mixture of nature, us and a complete thought in a strict structure.

    knight4696 commented on Haiku # 5 Lineage

    08-27-2010

    Great Haiku Asha! :) I love the how you're able to bring so much imagery in so few words! Awesome job! :) Ken
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    ApaqRasgirl

    08/27/2010

    thank you ken, that was a wonderful comment, I love writing Haiku's they are fun and speak volumes in just a few words, thats what makes them so fun..........love asha

    ginga commented on Haiku # 5 Lineage

    08-25-2010

    Asha, I have to tell you I love that word "glade," and esp because it does not get overused. Nice haiku and I think you meant to say "lies" and in the previous haiku about the felines" tempt" not temp. ginga
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    ApaqRasgirl

    08/25/2010

    ah, thank you dear, I love that word too. I will fix the mistake......on the word lye,,,,,,,,I wanted it to be singular, so was not sure if the word (lie) meant the same as what I needed, guess the spelling is the same for both........thanks and glad you liked them..........love asha

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