Closed Eyes

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Closed Eyes

Dark space, vast and wide,
No control over what I see,
Pitch black, empty, I have no
Vision of where I am going...
I only have a hand that
Is holding my hand,
Leading me some place,
Telling me to do some things...
It's hard for me to realize
That I have no control
Over my life and what happens

To be honest, I wish,
I could take a peak
Into my future and destiny,
Who is the One leading?
Where is He leading me to?
Why can't he just tell me?!
It's a surprise, trust me,
Close your eyes and walk....

When I stop walking,
He stops walking-
When I stop trusting,
He stops leading and
Let's me find my way...
But in the darkness,
It's impossible to see, and I
Bump my head on every-thing,

I am left with two choices,
Close my eyes and be surprised
Follow my way to my demise-

Trying to decide what to do,
I think I will close my eyes,
But that is hard to, most times...

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bklynrizz commented on Closed Eyes

11-16-2009

You have vividly described the meaning of FAITH. Great job.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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