Ameliorator

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    This poem was written several years ago, for a girl friend who connected with me well in every way, spiriutally, mentally, and physically. It was a time of happiness.

    Ameliorator


    When people are mean and cruel,
    Or callous and cold,
    I recall how kind and good you are.
    Then like a sunlit jewel,
    My memories of you unfold—
    To give me light in the dark of night like a bright new star.
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    When time, that used to give,
    Turns back to take away,
    I dream of the gifts from you that will last for life.
    When my hours seem harsh and painful to live,
    I luxuriate in the wonderful words I have heard you say;
    And I dream all the dreams of joy you sparked for me, to soothe the sorrowed strife.
    - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
    When heaven seems hard-hearted, so aloof above,
    I think of you as the angel I finally found;
    And even hell, if it ruthlessly waits, must grant your grace.
    I plucked the rose, and tossed the thorns to the ground:
    I found the fire and light of mortal love in your form and face.
    I had the heat of heaven in your sight and sound.
    You made everything better; for you were an angel of love.


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    Written by Michael LP, aka MLP
    aka PoetWithCancer, aka PWC, aka Mr. Poet
    Copyright © 2011 by M.L.P. All rights reserved

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    abuelita1 commented on Ameliorator

    11-22-2010

    Now THIS is the "light' I was talking about.....lol hmmmm......lol.... no, I really loved this one!!

    abuelita1 commented on Ameliorator

    09-26-2010

    Your words will continue to shine. How special this person must be. Another piece of heaven.

    lunamarie commented on Ameliorator

    05-04-2010

    woww .... what a special person .......... I'm sure you will meet them in heaven ............ Luna

    Skite commented on Ameliorator

    03-29-2010

    Did I forgot to rate it? Silly me...:) Here we go now, was carried away by the beauty of your poem, be well & come back soon!!

    Skite commented on Ameliorator

    03-27-2010

    Poet, this poem it's simply you, how sweet & gentle just like spring breeze...love is you..:)

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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