This Web We Weave

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    A rhyme of sorts about who we pretend to be versus who we really are

    This Web We Weave

     

    This web we weave  

    but to deceive

    so others may not see us

    may provide a veil

    that serves us well

    but it will eventually regress.

     

    Once the truth be known

    and the true face is shown

    the scars will be apparent

    And no feint of hand

    will be at your command

    to protect against the evil assailant.

     

        The answers lie within

    far below ones painted skin

    at the core of one’s inner being

    Only you can choose

    to win or loose

    and experience the act of freeing.

     

    So stand before your mirror

    so you can see all clearer

    and tell yourself who you see

    Is it the character you’ve created?

    The stranger with whom you mated

    Or is the real you staring back at thee.

     

    ©Copyright Charlie Gragg September 19, 2010

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    stellar commented on This Web We Weave

    10-15-2010

    Full of wisdom Hamp...and I'm glad that I have read it,,,add this to my favs...^_^ v
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    Hampton

    10/15/2010

    Always happy to receive your comments. Thanks.

    Charlie23 commented on This Web We Weave

    10-11-2010

    Your poem is very thought provoking, Hampton! I enjoyed reading!
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    Hampton

    10/11/2010

    Thank you. That's very nice of you.

    Kanicki commented on This Web We Weave

    10-07-2010

    A wonderful write so full of truth and wisdom. 10 ++++++ Peace and Love..."here's looking at you kid".
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    Hampton

    10/07/2010

    Your comments are appreciated.

    WordSlinger commented on This Web We Weave

    10-04-2010

    Hampton, what's up my friend all is well. when I look in the mirror, I have to laugh at the forest that gets cut, and I say to my self, how is this shaving the planet, lol, :) love it so true, thank you, WS
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    Hampton

    10/04/2010

    Thanks for checking in....................Hampton

    gogant commented on This Web We Weave

    10-01-2010

    I guess we all, at sometime in our lives, pretend to be something we are not.......just to be greater than what we are....but in the end, we have to look ourselves straight in the eye. This is a really special kind of poem by you, Hamp......
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    Hampton

    10/01/2010

    Thank you for reading and commenting.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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