The Confession

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    Poetry is intended to create both mystery, suspense as well as surprise.

    The Confession

     

    What a sorrowful soul I’ve become

    My actions cry out for scorn

    For on this day I did succumb

    And now I am most forlorn

     

    Through the center of the garden

    I crept as a predator might

    Selecting a victim most forbidden

     There before me all shiny and bright

     

     Losing control I reached out my hand

    Groping to capture its essence and beauty

    And for reasons I can’t understand

    I took possession as if by duty

     

    To my surprise no struggle did it make

    As I caressed its gorgeous stem

    I fondled and did partake

    Of its innocence like the beast I am

     

    I kissed it softly and inhaled its scent

    I could feel the lust build within

    My passion I could not vent

    As I felt the tingling upon my skin

     

    And as my excitement dwindled

    I knew that I must disclose

    This day my emotions were kindled

    As I kissed the red red rose.

     

    ©Copyright Charlie Gragg March 21, 2010

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    Madelynn commented on The Confession

    04-07-2010

    The sweetness of the perfect rose!-well, really theyre all perfect! You have decorated your page with masterful brilliance once again. I actually have a special 'thing' for roses, and always try and add them to all my spiritual writes-somewhere..even if just the scent, so I really ENJOYED this gift!-hugzMaddi
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    Hampton

    04/07/2010

    I thank you.

    dancinghawk commented on The Confession

    04-01-2010

    ah, beautiful write, Hampton! engaging, evocative ... i feel as if i've just snuck thru a dark garden, lol ... and just an overall lovely conceit ... -dh
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    Hampton

    04/01/2010

    Many thanks

    jademelissa74 commented on The Confession

    03-29-2010

    Charlie, this is so delightful! The anticipation kept building as the passion gently walked me through the center of the garden, intensifying the need to indulge in such a beautiful ending. You are an amazing writer.
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    Hampton

    03/29/2010

    Thank you very much for your kind words.

    dahlusion commented on The Confession

    03-23-2010

    Beautifully poetic in all of its voicing. Bravo! Peace and Light, Dah
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    Hampton

    03/23/2010

    Many thanks.

    gogant commented on The Confession

    03-21-2010

    Well, Hampton, old boy.....this is just so unbelievably magnificent. You lead us down one path, and then, BAM, we are softly rewarded with a rose.........great.........................gogant
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    Hampton

    03/21/2010

    I am pleased that you enjoyed it. Thank you.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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