Message to Papa

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    Thinking of others would be a good way to start off the year.

    Message to Papa

     

    We commend you dear friend for your able assistance

    Always responsive when called upon when we meet resistance

    From the tiniest of problems to those of large measure

    You take them all in stride with never a word of displeasure

     

    Well, we seek your guidance once more in a matter we all do lament

    It seems there are thousands of poems on OP without one single comment

    Now we know it can be said “that’s life suck it up”

    But that’s not much consolation for those with an empty comments cup

     

    It just doesn’t seem right that these poems should languish without notice

    While others bask in glory; that result just doesn’t suffice

    We respectively request that you champion our latest good cause

    And seek out a solution to bring these poems some minimal applause

     

    One approach that we offer, may we be so bold

    Is to maintain a separate OP section devoted to those “out in the cold”

    In that manner those of us that wish to read and observe

    Can provide at least one little comment and give them the attention they deserve

     

    ©Copyright Charlie Gragg, January 15, 2011

     

     

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    Teardrops commented on Message to Papa

    02-10-2011

    you get your point across in everything you write . Loved the poem and the content Marie
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    ginga commented on Message to Papa

    01-25-2011

    A passionate plea to the unread poems. A compassionate poet would only think of this plea and selflessness. ty ginga
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    Hampton

    01/25/2011

    Thank you. Papa read and responded before his sudden and unfortunate departure.

    WordSlinger commented on Message to Papa

    01-18-2011

    I try to promote ideas, and poets as much as possible. A poem game maybe need'd say like a HD Tv can be given away, lol The Poem is right, lol A random poem pop up, if one decided, to have that option thrown their way. All in all it's a great site. thank you for your perfect poem in it's all acord, love it, thank you WS
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    Hampton

    01/18/2011

    If people who normally go without comments on their poem(s) get a comment or two now and then they will be more motivated to stay and participate. That's my take. Thanks for providing input.

    JadedJezzabel commented on Message to Papa

    01-17-2011

    hampton...you are just the sweetest boy ever....................
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    Hampton

    01/17/2011

    I bet you say that to all the boys, Thanks a bunch.

    MindNumbing commented on Message to Papa

    01-17-2011

    So very true, hampton. There's a "buzz worthy" section in the forums that has proven to be quite useful on this subject. I'm hoping there will be other ways to draw attention to the lesser read poets here on OP, also. Thanks for posting this :)
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    Hampton

    01/17/2011

    Thanks, I think we will hear more about "highlighting" the forgotten poems as time goes by.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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