Compare Thee to a Winters Breeze

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    • If I speak in the tongues of men and angels, but have not love, I have become sounding brass or a tinkling symbol. And if I have prophecy and know all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have all faith so as to remove mountains, but have not love, I am nothing. And if I dole out all my goods, and if I deliver my body that I may boast but have not love, nothing I am profited. Love is long suffering, love is kind, it is not jealous, love does not boast, it is not inflated. It is not discourt

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    This one has a unique off-beat flow where the position of words may throw you off track

    Compare Thee to a Winters Breeze
    The cure, pure and painted
    Poured, tainted tears stained and smeared
    Magical mirror of miracles feared
    Murals and Manikins
    Smile, closer to death of the new year

    Captain of Karma
    Casting spells oh so well
    You'll see him pass by with shades on
    Blinded from a dream

    What a beautiful empty shell
    All colored of colors naive
    When I am king, you will be first to scream
    Screened from my empire

    Desire designed desolate of despair
    Despite divine divisions
    I shall deliver delicate delight
    Upon the microphone and compare thee
    To a winters breeze
    In the upper peninsula of Michigan

    A killers kiss
    Cold as death
    Sending smoke signals
    With each breath
    Bleeding slowly
    Frozen trickled red
    An example I shall set
    Head upon spear
    Outside my castle walls

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    SavVySam commented on Compare Thee to a Winters Breeze

    09-01-2009

    Maybe, I have finally lost it, but I finished this one laughing out loud! Very clever twist on a classic work! Loved it, great job!!!
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    Gracey commented on Compare Thee to a Winters Breeze

    08-23-2009

    haha, its really mischieveious and dark. I loved the lines "Smile, closer to death of the new year" and "When I am king, you will be first to scream" and the ending is also cool :~) really good work.
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    ginga commented on Compare Thee to a Winters Breeze

    08-12-2009

    pocket, A wild ride through the kingdom for sure. The metaphors and alliteration are fantastic here and lines like: "sending smoke signals" and "murals and manikins" are unusually fittinf and work well with all the remaining amazingly crafted verse. Very inspiring indeed! ginga
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    frog commented on Compare Thee to a Winters Breeze

    08-09-2009

    I love how your work flows from emotion to emotion and concept to concept.
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    Rendida commented on Compare Thee to a Winters Breeze

    08-06-2009

    Scrye is right you are a gifted story teller I love your analogys keep writing I look forward to reading more.
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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