umbrage

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  • Sadness

    umbrage

     i still want to be a superhero
    saving lives and flying over the city
    but like an ailing troubadour
    pulliing my pain across the floor
    i retreat to the comfort of pillows and covers
    and dream of fighting monsters and lovers

    i still want to be a rock star
    beautiful women watch me playing guitar
    but something has blocked the lights
    and the winter hours have ruined my nights
    it's within this dark that the truth comes about
    wasting time made my youth run out.




    2009

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    EyesOfRain commented on umbrage

    08-26-2012

    I come to your page to relax and know I'm in for a bit of good reading. Another engaging poem. And oh, how I can relate.
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    Crush

    08/26/2012

    wow, what a wonderful thing to say. thank you for spending so much time. YOU are a lovely and REAL talent and anything positive in the way of feedback is quite the honour. thank you so much !

    hjaycarney commented on umbrage

    04-29-2010

    monsters and lovers crying in pain releasing unrest dying in shame
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    Crush

    04/29/2010

    well said , my friend ! wish i wrote that !

    Insideme commented on umbrage

    03-24-2010

    This really hit home with me, retreating to pillows and covers has been something I have done often in the process of life.
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    Crush

    03/25/2010

    thank you, i am glad if reached you....thanks for reading me.

    Marsink commented on umbrage

    10-29-2009

    Too true; wasted time pining to be that which we can never be. Excellen write, first words to last line. Thanks for drawing us into your world. you might like "Hero", though not nearly as profound as this work.
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    Crush

    11/01/2009

    i will read you.

    patricialouise commented on umbrage

    10-05-2009

    Good read. Darlin', you are way to YOUNG to think it is Too Late. True, somethings we have to start early in life but we learn everyday and you can still be a super star. From your poems, I know you can express yourself, your deep feelings. Use this gift. Voluteer. If you can reach but one soul you are a super star. I have faith in you.
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    Crush

    10/05/2009

    ya know something, you are right. it is never too late to be a superstar. when i wrote this dark poem last year i thought time had run out. i feel that starting at my age would be impossible. it wasn't, i came through it just fine. thanks for you time, most appreciated.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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