crows feet

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    i hope you like it and take what you will from it :)

    crows feet

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    my age is creased across my brow
    crushed me into a frown just now
                 and i
    can't hide my feelings
    as i deal with my approaching 50's

    i grimace not for growing older
    rather, in protest of those reporting my demise

    crows haven't come to claim me
    they have just walked around my eyes








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    gmcookie commented on crows feet

    04-14-2013

    The secret is to lie real still And when the crows light - do the kill. Upon ensuring their demise, Bake yourself some birdie pies... A great write, my friend. Humorous, but thoughtful at the same time.
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    trocka7 commented on crows feet

    03-08-2013

    You know this is so good :) Feels light and it is amazing to me how VOLUMES were conveyed in the last 4 sentences....like someone else said, it's like the Bruce Lee strike...quick yet powerful... truly enjoyed this :)
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    poetrygal45 commented on crows feet

    02-22-2013

    Beautifully penned.. I love your style of writing and feel a connect with you spiritually in some way.. I shall return to read more.. please come read me.. would love to here your thoughts.
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    crhymethinc commented on crows feet

    02-01-2013

    Dang them crows. I really like this. Well done. Like Bruce Lee's famous strike, you've packed a lot of wollop into a small punch.
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    Phission

    02/04/2013

    thank you so much. some of your work is now living in my favourites locker.

    Kingwebstar commented on crows feet

    10-18-2012

    Great write indeed. Life is filled with hidden wisdom it's up to us to find it. Also Crazy how after you're teen years ,time flies When you're in school time was slow. I'm almost 30 . I am appreciative of making it to see this age never thought i would make it .Your poem is a great wake up call to how far we came and still the will to push forward. Crush it's a honor to have met you through this wonderful life of poetry .Royal Love 2 U
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    Crush

    10/19/2012

    same to you, king ! i appreciate your time and attention to my word. i do enjoy your work as you well know. thanks again.

    Kingwebstar

    10/19/2012

    No problem your work is inspiration in itself. I would buy your book in a heartbeat.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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