dresses

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    dresses


    girls in blue dresses
    confused by who arrived
    hated green girl dresses
    how could they all survive
    yellow dress was broody
    when orange did appear
    and purple became moody
    swung from the chandelier
    beige was in the kitchen
    cooking up some ooze
    i think she meant to poison
    the strange and pale chartreuse
    rose was in the garden
    poised against the pinks
    and black was in the bathroom stalls
    clogging up the sinks
    brown could not behave
    dismantling the beds
    while amber dug a shallow grave
    for unsuspecting red
    white was in some foul mood
    when introduced to puce
    while fuschia did negotiate
    while fashioning a noose
    but
    when multi-coloured materialized
    they all did gasp and cheer
    amazed how she could alchemize
    without a rainbow near
    all colours in a crayon box
    a tapestry or terror
    to hate is such a paradox
    and such a human error





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    purdylox commented on dresses

    11-10-2010

    at frist I thought "wow I found a poem that I dont like" yet before the the middle I was hooked.
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    Crush

    11/10/2010

    thank you. this was so much fun to write and came together in an afternoon. thank you so much. predjudice in any form undresses what is really at the core of a person. often reveals the ugly truth.

    SEVEN commented on dresses

    09-27-2010

    I totally like this piece because when the colors are all together makes a happy song now matter what flavor......these dresses made my day....thanks
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    Crush

    09/28/2010

    thank you. dresses was a fun write but a difficult subject. thank you for your tim and attention.

    cheronld commented on dresses

    06-19-2010

    Wow....what a clever and amusing way to touch base on this subject...I laughed when I got to the end....another favorite of mine...I look forward to reading the rest of your poems as well as something new....NO PRESSURE...Lol...
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    hjaycarney commented on dresses

    04-29-2010

    colorfully brilliant, or brilliantly colorful - i can't decide. very cleverly written. i am enjoying your work
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    WordSlinger commented on dresses

    02-23-2010

    I like this very muc, this part is Royal((when multi-coloured materialized they all did gasp and cheer amazed how she could alchemize without a rainbow near )) ty WS
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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