The kiss

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    The kiss

    You played a game of love with me
    you took me all the way,
    I found myself in heavens care
    I was completely swept away.

    Full of wonder and tender schemes
    my heart became complete,
    it lifted me higher till-
    I floated off my feet.

    Then one day I looked for you
    but you had taken flight,
    you had left me all alone
    to face a darkened night.

    But as fear began to come
    with tears of utter despair,
    I was meant with revelation
    while sitting in my chair.

    A laugh bubbled up inside me
    for I had found a beautiful bliss,
    that I would never had found
    had it not been for your sweet kiss.

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    wildpendigus commented on The kiss

    06-25-2009

    I think this is one of your best poems , I think could be converted into a nice romantic ballad and who knows it maybe a million seller, no doubt you have a lot of talent, I wish you all the best so good luck ! grecowong@yahoo.com
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    poetrygal45

    06/25/2009

    I tried to e-mail you about the music thing but it did not go through to you. I did not mess up the address either.

    poetrygal45

    06/25/2009

    okay it went through now.

    randomthoughts commented on The kiss

    06-23-2009

    :).........................................(: Smile :)...........................................:)
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    cagle64 commented on The kiss

    06-23-2009

    wonderful piece of work i liked it and could relate 2 it as well.
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    FLAWLES commented on The kiss

    06-23-2009

    This reminds me of being kissed goodnight, except this appears to be kissed goodlife. Regardless of MY interpretation, it' a very nice poem.
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    ELRey commented on The kiss

    06-22-2009

    Sweet and complete. The rythem poured like water from a vase nurturing peonies in the spring. A lovely poem my dear. El Rey
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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