brooding eyes...

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    brooding eyes...
    Brooding eyes of sea blue glass
    a somber heart filled with shame,
    she seeks to be found but never is
    she always filled with pain.

    Wounds don't heal, they only grow
    faint against the back drop she calls
    her life,
    never moving fast enough
    always filled with chaos and strife.

    Her hair dark as the midnight sky
    drifting over her milk white shell,
    A gift from heaven she wants to be
    but she finds herself in hell.

    Reaching out with arms of peace
    she looks for gentle hands,
    someone that will love her
    deep and true; some one who
    understands.

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    Rocetman commented on brooding eyes...

    07-21-2009

    excelent, you left me longing. this said all that needed to be said ,short and sweet,( I'm still thinking about your words.)
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    FLAWLES commented on brooding eyes...

    07-18-2009

    Very good pg. I hope this was just something off the top of your head. Sometimes some of the best poems come from actual experiences.
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    lightcourier commented on brooding eyes...

    07-05-2009

    very poignant! The valhallic odyssey of the heart! Nice work. Thanks!
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    ELRey commented on brooding eyes...

    06-22-2009

    So dark and pure and longing. Your gift is simplicity The rythem catures the spirit. Well done my darling I hope you find your one.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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