echoes of goodbye

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    echoes of goodbye

    Breezes blowing, glistening trees
    summer whispers out its pleas,

    upon a bed of lushes grass I sit,
    under open skies
    so brightly lit
    and call out to my lovers heart
    will he hear my cries....

    or will they go unheard forever
    with echoes of goobye.......

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    BlackKnightOS commented on echoes of goodbye

    07-01-2009

    Po, you always pick the best pictures for your poems. I enjoyed reading this poem, even though short, it is well written. :o)
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    poetrygal45

    07/01/2009

    Thanks for all your comments Blacknight, Your a real sweetie.

    StandingBear commented on echoes of goodbye

    06-30-2009

    Even if he has no conscience still he has a heart and whether or not he admits, you know he felt and heard your cries. Great write.
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    TREVON commented on echoes of goodbye

    06-29-2009

    I hope he hears them, for I surely did it was as though I were there sitting watching you. You trully brought me into were you were. That is rare, and I relish it. Trevon It sounds like my backyard , at night when I star gaze.
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    WordSlinger commented on echoes of goodbye

    06-29-2009

    I like how you circled the rhyme in stanza 2. Interesting this also sounds like a picnic with nature.
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    randomthoughts commented on echoes of goodbye

    06-28-2009

    an ear that listens , a shoulder to lay on , a friend that cares
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