My Broken Heart Bleeds

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    My Broken Heart Sings A Bloody Sad Song ...

    My Broken Heart Bleeds

    My broken heart bleeds - crimson red
    upon my blood stained sleeve.
    Ever since the day you left
    and stole off with my dreams.

    My broken heart bleeds - crimson tears
    rippling down my face.
    Ever since you left me here
    to wallow in my disgrace.

    How could you ...
    run off and leave me like this,
    after all that we've been through?
    How could you ...
    take all I had to give,
    Don't I mean anything to you?
    How could you ...
    just throw our love away,
    like it's dead and obsolete?
    How could you ...
    Can you just tell me please?
    Tell Me Please!!
    As My Broken Heart Bleeds!!
    My Broken Heart Bleeds!!

    My broken heart bleeds - crimson drops
    from the corners of my eyes.
    Ever since you went away
    and left me here to die.

    My broken heart bleeds - crimson red
    as my life slowly slips away.
    Just can't go on living alone
    Without you for another day!

    How could you ...
    run off and leave me like this,
    after all that we've been through?
    How could you ...
    take all I had to give,
    Don't I mean anything to you?
    How could you ...
    just throw our love away,
    like it's dead and obsolete?
    How could you ...
    Can you just tell me please?
    Tell Me Please!!
    As My Broken Heart Bleeds!!
    My Broken Heart Bleeds!!

       

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    Teardrops commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

    06-04-2010

    Dam Ken you made me cry . Dont let the past rule how you love today . YOu made me feel your pain as only you can do thanks Marie
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    knight4696

    06/07/2010

    Marie ...Don't cry! :) lol ... I will never let the past rule me. I wrote this to relaease the pain I was feeling at the time, but rest assured my friend. The Pain has been with Love that will be forever more. Thanks again my friend. :) Ken

    am2anangel commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

    01-27-2010

    great yet sad write suffering a broken heart is always a trial.
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    knight4696

    01/27/2010

    Thanks Angel! This is just okay to me - not one of my favorite lyrics .. Needs some tweaking ..I think. But it seems to be getting good reviews ... Thanks for all of the reads and comments! :) ya better stop it though, you're spoiling me! lol! :) Thanks again, Ken

    precpres commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

    12-21-2009

    Very Strong. Very Interesting. Extremely Deep. Really enjoyed reading.
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    knight4696

    12/21/2009

    Thank you very much Precpres! I appreciate your kind words! ... Ken

    MarionYost commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

    12-10-2009

    This is awesome.. Quite a 360 from "Unholy Union"... Your style is versatile... I love that... good Job Ken... You're right up there with Moot (Point).. AWSEOME JOB. Talented as hell Can't wait for more. All the best -Marion-
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    knight4696

    12/10/2009

    Thx for the Kudos Marion! Ya Moot is one of my favorites on OP he is amazing. I am humbled that you compare me to him. Thanks again, Ken

    summerrose35 commented on My Broken Heart Bleeds

    12-07-2009

    Another lyrical masterpiece!!WOW!!You are really good at this!! Thanks Ken!!
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    knight4696

    12/08/2009

    Thanks Summer- Stop it!! You're making me blush! :) Once again, I appreciate your Kudos! Ken

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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