HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

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    A Special Happy Birthday Wish! :)

    HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

     Happy Birthday to a special friend …
    A day to remember with much affection!  There’ll be -
    Presents, a cake and ice cream too!  Which will be just -
    Perfect for Today’s celebration!
    You are The One, The Reason, The Star! -  Why we come from near and afar!

    Birthdays come but just once a year …
    I thought it would be nice to send you some Cheer!
    Right to your doorstep,  but it would not be as quick,
    The thought of being late – would just make me sick!  I -
    Hope you enjoy your special day …
    Delighted in every possible way!  And -
    Along with your friends and family,  I wish -
    You a Very Happy Birthday!!  Well, you get the gist!  :)



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    Tiggeredtoo commented on HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

    01-28-2010

    Okay, I really like this one. It's so well thought out! I don't feel that you are forcing the phrases to fit. It's very natural.
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    knight4696

    01/28/2010

    Thanks Tigger! :) This one is so far from my usual style .. but I did try to keep it real. Thanks for noticing! :) Ken

    am2anangel commented on HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

    01-25-2010

    sweet write. lovely sentiments to a friend. I hope they appreciated it. reminded me of primary school days in the style of it. lol!
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    knight4696

    01/26/2010

    lol! ya a little a,b.c and 1,2,3 can get you far! :) I wrote this for kmooney here on OP. He has a lot of acostic poems and thought this style fitting for him. He appreciated it. :) Anyway .. thanks for your comments once again! :) Ken

    Tempy

    04/11/2010

    i hope they appreciated it too. came back to read it again. I hope so too. I love the picture you have used in this poem, it's so funny :)

    Charlie23 commented on HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

    01-20-2010

    I like what you did here, the styles a bit different from your others, but an enjoyable read. The image you choose to to post with it also adds an appeal, diffenately better than some of the cards you see on store shelves when looking for the perfect sentiment.
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    knight4696

    01/20/2010

    Thanks again Charlie! :) Hmmm . maybe I should check if Hallmark is hiring? :) lol! Thanks again my friend! Ken

    MarionYost commented on HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

    01-18-2010

    Very original & creative Ken! Loved it... But that's nothing new, Nice... All the best -Marion-
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    knight4696

    01/18/2010

    Thanks Marion - definately a different style for me as you surely know. :) Thanks for the wonderful comments! :) Ken

    koolmom0 commented on HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

    01-18-2010

    Honey, this should be on a hallmark card. Now where's my card at...lol :) Kool
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    knight4696

    01/18/2010

    LOL! :) Thanks Kool! I appreciate it as always! :) Ken

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