Captive

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    Captive

    You have a way of keeping me ...

    You keep me lost within a trance
    Your spell mesmerizes my mind.
    Captivated - I have no control
    I'm kept spellbound and hypnotized.

    Somehow I've become so stricken
    Feeling habitually confused.
    Bound to my endless addiction
    Can't seem to break away from you.

    You keep me coming back for more
    I'm your addict and need my fix.
    The craving - so intense and pure
    There's just no escaping it

    This undying need and longing
    have become too much to bear.
    Your mind captivates my heart
    leaving me defenseless and impaired.

    I'm destined to be your captive
    I've no desire to escape.
    Forever a prisoner of your spell
    I accept you to be my fate.

    You have a way of keeping me ...

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    cheronld commented on Captive

    05-20-2010

    I soooo relate to this really nice poem.....in truth I think I'm still a slave to that very love no matter how destructive it is too my heart...lol....just don't tell anybody I said so.....:-)...looking forward to your return...
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    knight4696

    05/21/2010

    Thanks again Cheron! :) Oh don't worry .. your secrets safe with me! :) I wrote this for Nicole when she was unaware of my feelings .. Now that she knows .. it hasn't changed - it just intensified - I am still her captive! :) Thanks again for all of your reads and comments. I will be back soon my friend ..I have soooo much going on right now, just haven't had time to write , read, comment or reply! ughhhh!!! Things WILL hopefully settle down in a couple months and get back to normal. Thanks again for your friendship and loyalty ..I really do appreciate it! :) Ken

    Teardrops commented on Captive

    03-18-2010

    Ok I love spells . bubble , bubble toll and trouble lol Ken i have a to say you cant write anything I dont love great poem and I see your heart too full of love thanks Marie
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    knight4696

    03/20/2010

    lol! Thanks Marie! Ya there's always something intiguing to me about the witches brew. :) Thanks again! Ken

    danmartyjake1 commented on Captive

    02-26-2010

    Yes, I know this feeling well and you described it all too well, my friend, great writing. I felt the lovesickness that you were playing out in your delicate words.
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    knight4696

    02/27/2010

    Thank you Marion! :) I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thanks again! :) Ken

    Rhymer commented on Captive

    01-31-2010

    Wow! what can I say, except anothe rpiece of written perfection. Enjoyed reading your talent once again
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    knight4696

    01/31/2010

    Thank you once again friend! :) I enjoy your work immensely as well... You write so deep from within your heart and soul that it is so tangible to the reader. I respect you for it and enjoy your talent as well, Thanks, Ken

    stellar commented on Captive

    01-31-2010

    A lovely poem...I love the contradiction...it's like saying I wanna be your slave my love haha...I love to be held captive by love and be enslaved by love,,,hahaha///Great write knight!
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    knight4696

    01/31/2010

    Thanks again Stellar! :) That is the contradiction I've penned .. It's both metaphoric and literal ... hey , bondage can be fun sometimes! lol! :) Thanks! Ken

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