One last breath.. Before i die

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    Another title given to me by a friend, Hope you like the emo shit ^.^ i do >.>

    One last breath.. Before i die

     It's cold out here tonight
    the moon, so bright
    grass so green and smooth
    gentle wind, caressing to sooth

    I can feel the pain
    winter cold has yet to numb
    I'm cheating, what a shame
    heh, i wonder if they'll tihnk im dumb

    I wonder what they'll say about me
    laying here, bleeding under a tree
    when will they find me...
    in a week, in a day? an eternity?

    will i go to heaven for this...
    nah, im going to hell i know it
    life wasn't all fun and bliss
    infact is was the opposite

    so now i sit here bleeding to death
    when will i draw my final breath?
    i wont even try to fight
    It's cold out here tonight

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    MarionYost commented on One last breath.. Before i die

    01-29-2010

    This write is very true, I know I've been there more than a few times. (Unfortunately) nice job with this one. All the best -Marion-
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    EvilPoems

    02/09/2010

    eh, so have I

    Fallenangel87 commented on One last breath.. Before i die

    01-29-2010

    I can definitely relate to this write. Nice flow. good job with this one all the best -fallenangel87-
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    stever commented on One last breath.. Before i die

    12-29-2009

    wow another great poem...i seen you wanted title 4 new poems i was gonna use this as a band name [chainsaw suicide]
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    PoetsofBlood commented on One last breath.. Before i die

    12-15-2009

    This is a heart wretching metephore, perfectly written to eval life and the cold hearted response of human ignorance! Alexia's heart bleeds for you in this write-here my lil'horror minion, let me drip some warm blood in a cup for you-to help keep ya warm..see I'm not so evil,after all!-wink,Alexia
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    EvilPoems

    12/15/2009

    i love the taste of blood...

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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