Cold Crow the Slayer

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    Cold Crow the Slayer

    Cold Crow, Cold Crow
    bringing blood and sorrow
    time is short, time is short
    the time has come for bloody sport

    no one knows where he came from
    you will see him when your time comes
    he walks the land searching for sick or old
    his ways quick, his breath, cold

    searching forever to do his skill
    searching forever to hunt and kill
    Cold Crow the Slayer
    hunts from now into forever

    time has come, death eternal
    blood has spilled, a new miracle
    Cold Crow, set my soul free
    Cold Crow, is not our enemy

    he has all the signs of death
    blood, hellish, skeletal, only soul left
    he cant be killed, he cannot die
    under ground your body shall lie

    he comes with burning sky
    he shall free, soul fly high
    free you with cresent blade
    watching silently in the shade

    Cold Crow, Cold Crow
    bringing blood and sorrow
    time is short, time is short
    the time has come for bloody sport

    time has come, death eternal
    blood has spilled, a new miracle
    Cold Crow, set my soul free
    Cold Crow, is not our enemy

    he guides your path to flame or light
    the eternal right hand of god's might
    wanderer of both worlds; day, night
    angel of heal, demon of blight

    his hooded cloak, blood soaked
    with heaven and hell, he's entangled
    he is the foremost, first
    never to live, forever cursed

    Cold Crow, Cold Crow
    bringing blood and sorrow
    time is short, time is short
    the time has come for bloody sport

    he eludes punishment and repent
    extra life or time, he never lent
    he allows for last words, promises out brought
    innocents, murders, all have been caught

    he creates rivers, of blood and despair
    battles, all fallen, taken into care
    he has felled demi-gods and kings
    he is the killer of all things

    time has come, death eternal
    blood has spilled, a new miracle
    Cold Crow, set my soul free
    Cold Crow, is not our enemy

    he is the messenger of future life
    loyalty, god, religion, all belief
    curropted burn, innocent fly
    coming of damnation, souls alive

    he is the entrance to a new world
    a new, fresh, un-spoiled
    he is the forever key
    unlocking for all, The Eternity

    Cold Crow, Cold Crow
    bringing blood and sorrow
    time is short, time is short
    the time has come for bloody sport

    time has come, death eternal
    blood has spilled, a new miracle
    Cold Crow, set my soul free
    Cold Crow, is not our enemy

    Cold Crow, Cold Crow
    time has come, death eternal
    bringing blood and sorrow
    blood has spilled, a new miracle
    time is short, time is short
    Cold Crow, set my soul free
    the time has come for bloody sport
    Cold Crow, is not our enemy

    Cold Crow, Cold Crow
    time is short, time is short
    Cold Crow.... Cold Crow....
    set my soul free
    time is short.... time is short....
    blood has spilled
    a new miracle

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    SuSpence commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

    05-20-2010

    Wow impressive! This would make an excellant song. I could see it going several ways. Maybe like hardcore thrash metal, just blasting guitar and belting out the lyrics. Or in a more Pixies/Nirvana style, which could prove more effective. The playing with sound, Soft and Hard. Start out real slow, meloncholic rythem for the first couple of stanzas, then burst into the loud thrashing riffs and vocals, then a few verses later, back to the slow meloncholic verse. Play it back and forth to maximize its effectiveness and draw people into the song. Great work. -Spence
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    EvilPoems

    05/20/2010

    oh always, i saw it as a more metal peice then a Nirvana like peice... but each to their own!

    whiteoleander commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

    04-12-2010

    I agree i would love to here these as lyrics with music your writings def have song potential!
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    EvilPoems

    04/12/2010

    you need to read my I Met Death, But I Didn't Die, i made it as an ICP tribute

    hoda commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

    03-01-2010

    Great poem! And I like reading it out loud. Great job. ^_^
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    EvilPoems

    04/02/2010

    thank you!

    Artie commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

    03-01-2010

    Sounds like it would be a kick ass song - 10 from me
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    stever commented on Cold Crow the Slayer

    02-12-2010

    NOW THIS JUST ROCKS ILOVE IT ..great imagry..love to hear the song you wrote to it....ty ty vm 4 readig all my stuff i will try to read all of yours soon, StEvEr
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