A little piece of Heaven...

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    Just couldnt stop my little fingers from writing what is flowing inside of me... To my new found inspiration, The one with the magic words, Thank you...

    A little piece of Heaven...

    Just give me your hand so that I can take you home with me...
    Come share my grandmother’s homemade fruit cobbler and it will set us free... 
    I hear bells drawing near the priest....
    Say that you vow never to hurt me and I promise that I will never
    leave.
    I see colors that are complimentary to the evolving seasons....
    You said that you want magic, a celestial type of love, A woman who can have your heart mind and soul, without any particular reason...
    Other than that she just took you to heaven and gave away Jesus's crown...
    Bless her with rubies while draping her in a silk night gown...
    Sure she will take myrrh and all of the things that you ever so graciously promised her... But she will always allow love to go in its stead...
    Come honey; let’s find glory together in our blessed bed...
    We shall sing with birds reaching the octave that doesn’t exist... show me the other side of this realm and Ill allow you to steal captivate and completely obliterate this chocolate bliss...
    I have a dollar in my pocket, And with you I don’t need much more...
    Set me in front of the ocean, under the skies, with the birds around our feet, and riches I can ignore...
    Show me who I am and I will show you who you are with me...
    Together we are what God said love and true happiness was meant to be...
    Journey, find love, give me your heart, and everything secure...
    Be my magic, be my joy, be my glory, my singing psalm,
    When I ache, in you I have found my healing balm...
    Give me your grace, lace me with your words, and give my name new meaning when I take on yours...
    Just save a little piece of heaven for me, when I look into your eyes, just hang me in your heart, and for nothing else I will desire...

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    JonTalbain commented on A little piece of Heaven...

    07-29-2010

    My dear. This is what is all about. I loved every second of it. Reminds me of what relationships should be like, but oft are not. Good job. I look forward to more.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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