Vampire's Smile

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  • Dark Poetry

    Vampire's Smile
    Dark rich blood slides down your neck
    I feel the sensation,
    The temptation of blood
    The hunger for the kill

    I long for the warmth
    The cries of pain
    As I sink fangs
    Deeper and deeper inside you

    Your emotionless face
    Pales with disbelief

    And I smile

    I tear you apart,
    Ripping your soul
    From the inside out

    I see tears now
    Feel them
    Taste them

    Streaming down your face
    Like black rain
    And the thrill of death rushes over me

    And I smile

    I release you
    And your cold dead body,
    Wilted and lifeless,
    Falls to the ground

    But still, I am not satisfied
    I yearn for more;
    More death,
    More blood,
    More tears

    I am the one immortal
    Eternally feared

    The one who walks in silence
    Down dark abandoned streets

    I am the one, who lives in the shadows
    And plays with your mind.

    And one day you'll know

    you'll feel my caress
    you'll look into my eyes
    And you'll know

    Why I smile.


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    WordSlinger commented on Vampire's Smile

    08-02-2009

    This is wicked, wicked, wicked, I'm such a big fan of yours..
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    lakugo commented on Vampire's Smile

    07-27-2009

    hauntingly good, if u write more like it id like to know
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    PrettyClaire commented on Vampire's Smile

    06-18-2009

    Oh ma daze,i really feel ur poems i've jst read 3 of them and i already gt goosebumps,unbelievable u ma frnd r so enthusiastic,i thought i wz d sadistic type of poet tho am new.bt rilli gt me on dis one.....Splendid!!!!
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    sugarcane1241 commented on Vampire's Smile

    05-25-2009

    I just wanted to say I love ur poems.Your about the only person on here that writes with such enthusiam!!!you should write spooky stories,you have talent and I've only read two so far.I also sent a freinds request,hopefully, you got it.i am new to the line.
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    Blade commented on Vampire's Smile

    05-09-2009

    that was awesome. It may make me seem creepy, but I love dark poetry. You did an awesome job bringing the reader into the poem.
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