The Troll (final...)

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    The Troll (final...)

    I cowered

    Hoping I would not become

    This beast’s second course

    It stood directly above me

    And I felt the terrible talons prick my flesh

    As it grasped me

     

    But pain was not forthcoming

    Instead,

    I was privy to what I could only describe

    As even more terrifying

    Than what had happened to my sister

     

    I felt the Troll’s tongue upon my body

    Lapping up all the remaining traces of my sister

    That covered me

     

    I was shaking profusely

    And coated in saliva

    That smelled worse than a sewage spill

     

    The Troll placed me back upon the floor

    And vanished

    Into the portal of emptiness and despair

    It had emerged from

     

    And I was left to ponder,

     

    Is this Netherworld evil

    Friend

    Or

    Foe????

     

     

     

     

     

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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on The Troll (final...)

    10-13-2009

    A great ending to a great serese its been a while.. Oh i posted a new one check it out thnx Grim..:)
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    dannyboy22 commented on The Troll (final...)

    09-29-2009

    i would say friend....very good imagery. it was more like i was watching it than reading.
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    Rocetman commented on The Troll (final...)

    09-26-2009

    It truely inspires a feel like my favorite stories from youth of Beowulf.. And the middle earth caracter from tolkien. I like it with it's puzzled feeling at the end, very well done. you gave it a feeling of a sequel for the end.. cool!
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    dahlusion commented on The Troll (final...)

    09-22-2009

    A perfectly creative bedtime story from one of the best scary poets this site as ever seen.
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    bandit1192 commented on The Troll (final...)

    09-12-2009

    Didn't you like your sister? Friend or foe? He'll be back for you, you know. He'll bide his time and then one night, You will forget and then he'll bite. On that I'll let you ponder. Loved your story. I have one called All Hallow's Eve I am going to post it at Halloween. I think you'll enjoy it. TS
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    beautifuldeath

    09/13/2009

    I cannot wait to hear it!! and when my Troll comes for me in the darkest of night I will be waiting for him. LOL

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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