Fiendish Night

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    This poem is featured in my book Visions of Darkness.

    Fiendish Night


    Come, dream for me within the night
    get lost in endless fright
    deep within my fiendish night

    Scream for me within the night
    get lost in terror's chill
    deep within my fiendish night

    Come, sing for me your dying words
    compose them with your fear
    compose them with my need

    Lace the notes with drops of blood
    speed the tempo with your tears
    sing for me your dying words

    Come, feel the power of my love
    taste your fear upon my lips
    savor my hands around your heart

    Scream for me within the night
    deep within my fiendish night
    safe, under my bleeding wings.


    ©2010 beautifuldeath

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    phoenix29 commented on Fiendish Night

    10-24-2019

    it was great to read your poetry again, i hope you are still writing. im back again lookiing for a way to revitalize the site,, also a 10 on this one
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    dahlusion commented on Fiendish Night

    01-14-2013

    "Come, sing for me your dying words compose them with your fear compose them with my need"—this is miraculous writing!
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    beautifuldeath

    01/15/2013

    Thank you so much!

    jenifer commented on Fiendish Night

    05-13-2012

    it feels unfinished , but its good
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    lonewolf commented on Fiendish Night

    11-26-2011

    damn girl. dont know if i should be scared or aroused. cant get enough of your words!!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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