Obsessive Cruelty

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    Obsessive Cruelty

    The night falls,
    falls in a heavy suffocating cloak
    as slender beams of accusation
    explode from feral eyes

    Fear grows,
    grows as the daggers of your words
    pierce my naked flesh
    sculpting me into a crimson masterpiece

    I raise my head in agony
    screaming against hurtful hands
    screaming against the groping fingers of your black obsessive cruelty
    I raise my head in agony

    Now, embracing this uncaring reality
    my soul thrives no more
    and I kneel before you a slave
    always a slave..

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    Phoenix9 commented on Obsessive Cruelty

    03-02-2013

    Keeping it dark and well written I see, Glad your still here, and as creative as always, A standing Ovation........
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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Obsessive Cruelty

    01-30-2013

    Words cannot describe the comfort I get form the dark words you craft into such beauty
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    lonewolf commented on Obsessive Cruelty

    01-20-2013

    Sad and painful. No one has power over you.... unless you give it to them.
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    dahlusion commented on Obsessive Cruelty

    01-18-2013

    Gothic beauty at its finest delivered by the one and only. Bravo!
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