Done

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    Done
    I am done
    finished, obsolete

    The chains of my past
    are tightening their grip

    The whispered words of hate
    have become deafening screams

    The scars on my body
    have become too noticeable

    The bruises that faded
    are now a myriad of vivid colors

    And I no longer have the strength nor will
    to make it go away

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    blu commented on Done

    05-16-2009

    The body is a prison sometimes.
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    Grito commented on Done

    03-17-2009

    Done in pain.
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    dahlusion commented on Done

    03-10-2009

    "The scars on my body have become too noticeable" —— this sent chills down my spine. We are only finished because we think we are. Imagine if we were to think the opposite. Just imagine it.
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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Done

    03-03-2009

    LOVE IT!! it deserves a ten but it wont let me get past 7.5 sry :( oh well its a great poem. I love the line about (the chains of my past.)
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    lonewolf commented on Done

    02-27-2009

    of course it would be a lie if it was less than 10. need i say youre writing is superb. you already know that
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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