Addicted

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    Addicted
    I have come to find
    That I am addicted to your words
    The soft wandering sonnets you pen
    Leave me moist and shivering

    Penetrate me with a vigorous portrayal
    Stroke me with obsessive perversion
    Capture me with your syllables
    And persuade me with lyrical tongue

    Make me your rough draft without revisions
    Hastily, recklessly insert word after word
    Scribble line after line of quixotic dialogue
    Upon every inch of my naked flesh

    For I have come to find
    I am addicted to your dialect
    And I eagerly await
    Your next passionate verse

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    Amare13 commented on Addicted

    05-29-2009

    This one is so sexy and dark...I love the addiction that is in what you write and is your thoughts on what captivates you to want to read more and it's metaphor for sex.
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    worsham commented on Addicted

    05-14-2009

    'Arousal' understates. This is the sexiest poem on the site.
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    adacn commented on Addicted

    05-12-2009

    your words send me to a place known to few... excellent.
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    kdarcy commented on Addicted

    04-22-2009

    well done, good choice of words
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    bandit1192 commented on Addicted

    02-09-2009

    excellant! You write so(I"m at a loss for words, I think I already said beautifully.) I must confess, had to look up quixotic. you've expanded my vocabulary as well as aroused my pen. TS
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