Death's Interrogation

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    Death's Interrogation
    If I were dead
    would you wake crying my name
    or would you sing in sweet harmony

    If I were dead
    would tears stain your cheeks
    or would your eyes twinkle with glee

    If I were dead
    would you keep me in your memories
    or would you erase all my tracks

    If I were dead
    would you remember my touch
    or would you forget every caress

    If I were dead
    would you miss me at all
    or would you laugh at that thought

    If I were dead
    would you applaud my death
    or would you regret

    not loving me enough????

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    dannyboy22 commented on Death's Interrogation

    10-07-2009

    WOW ... that's the best series of questions i believe i have ever seen. very thought provoking!
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    Crush commented on Death's Interrogation

    05-24-2009

    Boy, you pull no punches which is what I like about you. You are naked out there with your emotions and fearless with your words. Keep up the good work. I just wish you weren't so sad, honey.
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    lonewolf commented on Death's Interrogation

    04-03-2009

    If you were dead, I would grieve, for the world would have lost a most precious flower.
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    TheAngelOfDeath commented on Death's Interrogation

    02-18-2009

    i like it... its very good but im not big on the repetetive stuff. and i know my spelling suxs but i have a horrible key board. sometimes the letters wont hit right. lol :D
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    dahlusion commented on Death's Interrogation

    02-11-2009

    Beautiful composed like all of your work, but it is disturbing that you allow others this power over you: this power to be so down & hard on yourself. Take this power away from them!
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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