The Troll (part 3)

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    The Troll (part 3)

    I screamed and dove for the door

    It flew open just as I grabbed for the handle

    My sister stood there framed in the light

    I begged her RUN!!!!!

    Confusion slowed her

    And the Troll grabbed her in its monstrous claws

    Digging its nails into her flesh

     

    I watched in mute horror

    Unable to avert my eyes

    From the visual bloodbath before me

    Blood sprayed from her arteries

    Covering me in crimson graffiti

    In mere moments the Troll devoured my sister

    Leaving the only trace of her

    Splattered all over me

     

    The Troll turned upon me

    With apparent fury in its eyes

    And I prayed for invisibility….

     

     

     

     

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    bandit1192 commented on The Troll (part 3)

    09-11-2009

    PS LOVE the pic !...........................................
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    bandit1192 commented on The Troll (part 3)

    09-11-2009

    Tell me it's just a nightmare. You'll wake up to a bright and sunny day. Remember, I'm the ultimate optimist. This is one directly from my childhood. Waiting for the conclusion. :) TS
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    soulwriter commented on The Troll (part 3)

    09-11-2009

    "I watched in mute horror, Unable to avert my eyes" ... your beastly creation has no satisfaction for its destructible hunger. I'm still hungry, more please!
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