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    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

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    This is dedicated to the loss of jademelissa74's uncle.

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    The love that springs up forth from my heart,

     

    also begs, for you and I, to never part.

     

    It goes farther than to simply say, “I love you”.

     

    For three little words, will never do.

     

     

    It is something rare, inexplicable.

     

    Something forever cherished, indispensable.

     

    It is something that has taken over my senses,

     

    attacking my every nerve, till my body tenses.

     

     

    It is something I feel deeply inside of me.

     

    It furnishes me warmth offering security.

     

    It is something that makes me beg,

     

    It is something that makes me crave.

     

     

    To The Holy God that knows everything.

     

    Praises are to Him, whenever I sing.

     

    The one that sees everything and feels everything,

     

    The one that created everything and gave everything.

     

     

    For you my love to be always good.

     

    If I asked you to give me your love, I know you would.

     

    For you to be happy and to lack nothing.

     

    You’re like a forever shine.  You never need buffing.

     

     

    The love I feel for you, is worth everyday of giving praises.

     

    “Love” never says a word, yet it still goes farther, than full phrases.

     

    It is a muted blessed feeling, understood by, young and old.

     

    That without saying anything, screams to the heavens.  My heart it will forever hold.

     

     

    I have accepted the fact, that I wish to be by your side;

     

    And since your love gives me security, my love for you, will never hide.

     

    The love I feel for you, is deeply rooted within my heart.

     

    It is to be grateful to our God, that our love, will never part.

     

     

    To have given me the opportunity, the pleasure of loving you,

     

    And for you to meet a man, made by His own hand, we have a love that’s true.

     

    A man, that for love, gave it all to his love,

     

    Is the most, precious gift, from our God, up above.

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    Dezirae0106 commented on Untitled

    12-18-2012

    You describe perfectly what true love is. I really enjoyed reading this poem :)

    FLAWLES

    12/18/2012

    I doubt if ANYONE can describe what love is, let alone 'true love'; but I'm glad you enjoyed my rendition.

    AmandaT commented on Untitled

    10-08-2009

    Beautiful...I love this. Check out my page...I think you would enjoy it. I look forward to reading your other work.

    FLAWLES

    11/12/2009

    I'm glad you enjoyed this. I gotta say it is one of my best ones; but it would not have been possible withoutJademelissa74

    klassik commented on Untitled

    09-11-2009

    nice balance of "Flawles" and softness this is real!! great fellings in this piece, wonderful read!

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    Thank you for your compliments; but please understand, I owe the bulk of this to JADEMELISSA. I wrote this from a poen she wrote in Spanish that she translated to me in English.

    cmlestrade commented on Untitled

    07-31-2009

    Another good one Flawes. Great choice of words, almost lyrical in its flow. Keep on doing it for us

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    Thank you for your compliment; but most of this was made possible by JADEMELISSA74. Please Visit her page and check out her work.

    miwall513 commented on Untitled

    07-30-2009

    Yo I I I phew this is better than good. It took me awile to get to your poems because I've been writing at a feverish pace. They just seem to pour out faster than I can write. This is a masterpiece.

    FLAWLES

    10/16/2009

    I appreciate your words very much; but I have to be honest, I wish I could have written a poem like this on my own, O owe the concept and most of the choice of words to one of the BEST and talented poets on this site, by the name of JADEMELISSA74, Thank you for calling this a MASTERPIECE.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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