Baby I'm SORRY!

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  • Forgiveness
    • FLAWLES
    • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

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    Thank you for choosing to read this;  but first, PLEASE read the inspiration for this entitled "Unfit Love" by poetrygal45.  Thanks pg.

    Baby I'm SORRY!

    Please, do not cut this cord.  You are my blood supply.

     

    I am ashamed, of your, hurt and pain.  Baby, may I wipe the tears from your eye?

     

    I realize I can not, take back those words, that, tore you apart.

     

    I, apologize, I admit!  I mis-used love, from the start.

     

     

    I was blind to see, that you, did your best.  All you forgave, I took for granted.

     

    And still, I asked for more.  Naw!  I didn’t ask.  I fuckin demanded.

     

    There’s no need, to be forgiven, for the, distain-wicked-force you speak.

     

    Please baby,  no divorce.  If necessary, help I’ll seek.

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    poetrygal45 commented on Baby I'm SORRY!

    06-27-2009

    Wow very good. I love it. Your to good. I am impressed indeed. He would say those words but never mean them.
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    FLAWLES

    06/27/2009

    Thanx pg. I wouldn't say I'm too good; but I don't mind if you do.

    pumaheart commented on Baby I'm SORRY!

    06-26-2009

    I didn't rate your poem the first time because I wanted to close down my laptop and see hwat I remembered about your poem. Thats the true test of how good it is. Poetry is like a bank account, you have to put something into it, in order to get something out of it. The best poets are those who put themselves into their work. you responded to her poem with logic. Women are not logical, we are emotional. You should have told her "I love you".
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    FLAWLES

    06/26/2009

    I guess you're right; but, if we men KNEW what women wanted to hear, trust and beLIEVE, we'd say it. Thanx for your comments. They are greatly appreciated.

    pumaheart commented on Baby I'm SORRY!

    06-26-2009

    interesting take on what poetrygal45 wrote. If it was real life, Iwonder if she'd have given you one more chance...?
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    FLAWLES

    06/26/2009

    I don't know; but you gotta admit, I gave it my best shot.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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