The Rain Revised

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The Rain Revised

As the rain fell all around,

I couldn't help but think of you,

Then knees gave out,and i fell to the ground,

Wishing i could hear your voice.

Your voice becomes a distant memory,

That has begun to fade,

As i fall into this black abyss,

Swirling about me.

 I need you now,

More than ever,

I need you to save me,

From myself.

Your words oh so sweet,

Melt my aching heart,

And frees my mind,

From this abyss.

Your eyes so kind,

Lure me into a trance,

Where i forget all my worries,

And open m,y arms to a new embrace.

So if you read this,

I miss you,

And you should come home,

To me........

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

farmermason’s Poems (116)

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Strings 0
Embers 0
The Monster Called Love 0
The best of me 0
I miss the...... 0
This Demon 0
Questions 0
A world of her own 2
The Fight Within 2
Break 0
Charades 0
The Time Is Right 0
Untitled 0
Art 1
The Covers 0
Let these words 1
Fate 0
Suicide Notes and Butterfly Kisses 0
Thinking of you 0
Battlefield 0
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the letter 0
Haunting Dreams 1
The Mirror 0
A Letter To My Fiancee 0
Your Voice 0
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Ohne diche 0
The life i wanted. 2
"Without you" 0
"Angelic Kiss" 0
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The Darkness. 1
Like Suicide 1
Another Love Poem 0
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Love? 0
A Better Day 1
O love 0
My Trial 0
This needs no title. 0
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Like a Phoenix 0
If love was true 0
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Forgive and Forget 0
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Myself 2
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Too far 1
Fear 1
Fading 1
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The Rain Revised 0
Ich will 1
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Deep Inside 0
Heart grenade 0
The war between us 0
Portrait 1
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The beast inside 0
Wishes Upon a Star 0
Life 0
Instinct 0
Painted Image 1
Hell 0
Forbidden Fruit 0
The Phantom 1
This Night 0
Tears 0
Dead Memories 0
A guy like me 2
Three Week Anniversary 0
A little peice of heaven 0
Un answered questions 1
These Feelings 1
My Blades 0
Blades 1
Succubus 0
Wrong Perception 0
Wrong Perception 0
Untitled 0
Take Me Away 0
Faith 1
You Were There 0
Your lies 1
No Reason to live 1
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My Sacrifice 0
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A Lesson Learned 0
She's Different 0
You were my world 0
I gave you my heart 0
I'm Sorry 0
Lilith 0
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Through The Mirror 0
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The Pain Love Brings 0
Everlasting Fire 0
The Rain 0
My Love for you 0
My Day 0
The Darkness 0
Abaddon 0