I Tried

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I Tried

You Know that i love you,
So you pretend to care,
and i know that there is nothing i can do,
To make you feel the same.
But still i try,
Hoping that one day you would feel the same,
sometimes i ask myself why,
i have to love you.
But trying got me nowhere,
I'm back at square one,
Just like in my nightmare,
I failed once again.
Sometimes i ask myself,
If love truly does exist,
Unlike santas little elves,
which are just fantasy.
I wish there would be a sign
That tells me what to do,
Instead of waiting in line,
Like everyone else.

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djlong commented on I Tried

01-08-2012

i like this poem alot. I've read some of your poems and i feel i have a piece of advice i'd like to share with you... try to use stronger synonyms for certain descriptive words. itll make the poem more emotionally intense. Other than that your poems are really good =)

farmermason

01/08/2012

Thank you, it means alot.

optimistic commented on I Tried

01-01-2012

Very Interesting poem. I would like it to be more intense then it is it seems your coming into something good here, i think you have more intense words that could strikr this poem to be excellent great write. great poem and great start.

farmermason

01/02/2012

Thank You, Your opinion is greatly apperciated. And i try my best to write better peices of art.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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