The Calm Before the Storm

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    The Calm Before the Storm

    You're always hearing of 
    the calm before the storm.
    That eerie silence that makes you squirm,
    while stealthily cutting to the bone,
    but what about the calm after?
    Your attack is done, your mind is well.
    No more thrashing, writhing, kicking,
    no more screaming, crying, begging.
    No more clothes-on-in-the-shower nights.
    The calm after the storm,
    he settles on your mind,
    not like a fog or a storm or a muggy day,
    but a soft, welcoming blanket.
    The calm after the storm
    is crystal clear, light as air,
    a puzzles missing piece.
    Everything finally comes together,
    it all makes sudden sense.
    Enjoy it while it lasts,
    because the two calms,
    may just be the exact same. 

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    Xxchosen1xX commented on The Calm Before the Storm

    06-27-2011

    Wow! This is poem is amazing! You should check out some of mine too. This deserves to be a classic.

    brokenhearted11

    07/05/2011

    Thanks! And sure, why the hell not xD

    angelchaser commented on The Calm Before the Storm

    06-24-2011

    You never cease to amaze, young lady :). I still say you're a far better poet than I.

    brokenhearted11

    06/26/2011

    Aw shuckssss(: I'm definitely not a better poet than you, especially not on a poem this.... slow/stupid/literal, but thanks/

    rainbowfanatic commented on The Calm Before the Storm

    06-21-2011

    i like the way you punctuated your poem. i also like the words you used and the line breaks you made. your poem kind of made me feel "the calm"

    brokenhearted11

    06/26/2011

    Thank you, and though that's not quite the purpose, I'm glad

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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