I Miss You

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    for andrew, my ex-next-door-neighbor. they got mixed up and divorced and screwed up and they moved. theyre gone. i loved them so much. he was a year above me, and i loved him.

    I Miss You
    Many a night
    I lay in bed
    listening to music.
    The meaningful lyrics,
    the guitar softly strumming,
    the drums keeping a steady beat.
    The music
    that reminds me of you.
     I reminisce
    not knowing
    whether to laugh
    or to cry.
    I cling pitifully to
    the memories I have kept.
    The conversation
    that I have stolen.
    And I remember.
    I miss you.
    I miss hearing your laugh.
    And glancing behind me
    and knowing you are there.
    I miss your obsession with zombies.
    And your insane love for video games
    I miss your happy-go-lucky attitude.
    And the compassion you have for your brothers.
    I miss spending late nights next door at your house,
    watching movies, playing games.
    And not going back home til late.
    I miss the things that make you who you are.
    Like your dogs.
    Or banana popsicles.
    Or a glance from one of my friends,
    casually directed towards you.
    I miss the things that remind me of you.
    Like swimming in the pool.
    Or long road trips.
    Or spending the day in my pajamas
    like you always would.

    I miss you.

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    sunshine33710 commented on I Miss You

    09-19-2010

    Awwww that is so sweet but sad. Hopefully he knows how to get a hold you when he wants to talk to you. That was very good.
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    brokenhearted11

    09/20/2010

    yeah, hopefully...... thank ya'!

    Teardrops commented on I Miss You

    08-11-2010

    I know this kind of pain and sorrow . It will get better but you will never lose the memoires of him . Great write my friend Marie
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    brokenhearted11

    08/12/2010

    thank you :D

    SEVEN commented on I Miss You

    08-11-2010

    Aw, I wish I had a chick write a poem like this about me. Who am I kiddin, I just wish I had a chick...hehe...nice write...I hope that person apprieciated this poem...Kudos
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    brokenhearted11

    08/12/2010

    ahahaha,...... but nahh he has NOOO idea. anywayss, thanks

    angelchaser commented on I Miss You

    08-07-2010

    This is so sad and really sweet. It brought back memories for me, thanks for sharing it:)
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    brokenhearted11

    08/07/2010

    your welcome :) and thanks

    sk8erpoet commented on I Miss You

    07-22-2010

    i loved the poem...i know how you feel.....someday you will meet again....great write...sk8
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    brokenhearted11

    07/22/2010

    thanks ., and i hope we do :)

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