A Whisper in the Night

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  • Lost Love

    A Whisper in the Night
    A whisper in the night,
    a trickle of water,
    a warm breeze blowing on my face.
    LOve has grazed my heart,
    my body.
    Never sinking in
    just running its fingers
    down my heart,
    leaving little indentations.
    Gives me just a
    moment
    then it flees,
    like a whisper in the night,
    a trickle of water,
    a warm breeze on my face. 

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    chasitylake123 commented on A Whisper in the Night

    06-18-2010

    this is so short and simple but it says so much people are right to call you an old soul i am one also this poem is amazing its sweet and it tells a story.
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    Mandi commented on A Whisper in the Night

    06-13-2010

    awww, young love... you have a lovely touch wiith writing love is wakening in your psyche I envy y ou.... you have your first experience awaiting you as you do (expeerience them) keep writing!
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    brokenhearted11

    06/13/2010

    thank you :)

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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