Just Remember

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    Just Remember

    Those poison laced words dug straight into her wrist.
    Cut out the middle man,
    and go straight to the glare of fresh, bloody hurt
    sitting, proof, on her arm.
    The static in that head of hers
    it wouldn't quiet. Wouldn't quit. Wouldn't leave her alone.
    How would she forgive? She always forgave.
    Always went back.
    The words stung sharper
    than the shove he had gifted her,
    the bruised arm, the black eye,
    the purple marks spanning across her.
    The bruises would fade, the cuts would heal,
    but forgetting was not an option. 

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    speechless commented on Just Remember

    04-24-2011

    wow... that was emotionally intense. your wording was amazing, perfectly capturing me. you tread across an issue so many over look. great job dear, great job.

    brokenhearted11

    04/24/2011

    Intense is my middle name. Thank you, I try to push peoples limits, to a certain extent atleast. I appreciate the comment

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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