Blackberry Fingers

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    Blackberry Fingers
    Her tragic smile,
    makes way for luminous eyes.
    Eyes with a story to tell,
    eyes that hold a whole novel,
    a whole series
    of words.
    The feeling of her presence 
    resembles the knot in my throat,
    the ball of worry in my stomach,
    and blackberry stained fingerprints on white tablecloth 

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    sk8erpoet commented on Blackberry Fingers

    01-21-2011

    this is a really great poem.....it makes you think.....someday things will be different..great write...sk8
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    brokenhearted11

    01/21/2011

    thank you(:

    bubba commented on Blackberry Fingers

    01-13-2011

    This takes me back to my younger day's where my heart was good and my mind was a blaze with things to do that day, Blackberries were my fav. as a kid and to this day ill stop to pick em, now the other part's of the poem tell a sadness that has dawned on me many of time's it strike's me with a powerful blow to see you right such things that can bring back once buried thoughts and lost memories, its very...enticing to say the least its a wonderful write, its a powerful one too, say's alot to me with such few word's. --------sorry for how long it took me to comment, but i couldnt find the word's too say. Kudo's girl kudos, i also agree with angel's comment----Sincerely Daniel
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    brokenhearted11

    01/14/2011

    thats cool, hahaha(: thankyou!!

    angelchaser commented on Blackberry Fingers

    01-13-2011

    Your poetry is much more EVERYTHING than mine, how do you write like this at only 12????????????????????????????????????
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    brokenhearted11

    01/14/2011

    nah, unless 'childish' is considered under everything ;) i dont know, ive read better than mine by classmates. its nothing special, but thanks

    danmartyjake1 commented on Blackberry Fingers

    01-13-2011

    I do like the metaphors and imagery in this poem very much. It carries a sweetness in it's sadness. It reminds me of childhood things. Very Nicely done!
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    brokenhearted11

    01/14/2011

    thanks! i appreciate it(:

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