Too Old to be Young, Too Young to be Old

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  • Growing Up

    Too Old to be Young, Too Young to be Old

    Awkward, gangly, 
     all elbows and legs, 
    with necks too long and thoughts too small,
    we act like adults,
    or maybe like little kids.
    Lighthearted and free,
    or possibly just fucking stressed.
    Drinking, smoking, doing drugs,
    swinging, giggling, long warm hugs.
    Two worlds
    crammed into one head, 
    one body,
    one soul.
    The freedom of childhood,
    the responsibility of adults.
    Making bad choices,
    screwing up bad,
    learning from our mistakes sometimes,
    other times not so much,
    but hey.
    We're only human, right?
    Kids?
    Or adults? 

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    DeepEclipse commented on Too Old to be Young, Too Young to be Old

    12-30-2010

    Perfect paradox. (The freedom of childhood, the responsibility of adults.) - The balance right there. How we want our cake and eat it too. Trying to always tip the scales to our favor. Yet whe one tips the other does as well. Opposite harmony. You balanced this piece well.
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    brokenhearted11

    12/30/2010

    thank youu, exactly. when youre young, you wish to be older. when youre old, you wish only to be a kid again. its crazy.

    christianprep commented on Too Old to be Young, Too Young to be Old

    12-12-2010

    The poem was great.... child hood can be many things but when a baby a baby is perfect its when they get older that the conserns problems come into place through choices... this is suppose to be a little humorous.. in which im not good at
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    brokenhearted11

    12/12/2010

    thank you! and exactly, i envy the innocence and the genuineness of young childhood, their view of the world still new and unaltered. i appreciate the comment!!!

    angelchaser commented on Too Old to be Young, Too Young to be Old

    12-10-2010

    This is very good, but I don't think I should say anything else about this poem :P
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    brokenhearted11

    12/10/2010

    okay? haha thanks for reading i guess..

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