Emma the Flautist

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This is about an amazing girl I met at band camp... Flautist=flute player= pronounced FLOWtist

Emma the Flautist

One of her ipod earbuds
is sitting in my ear, we're both connected
to "High" by James Blunt.
I hear her singing along, through the haze, with
That raspy voice that could mean sex,
or burnt hair, or laundry detergent.
My head rests on her bare upper thigh,
my eyes cloesd, thank god,
or maybe they'd wander.
My throat is clotting with
words better left unsaid,
or maybe I'm about to cry?
I'm content to lie, half asleep,
in this moment of contentedness,
with no comment to the stagnant air
or anyone blabbering.
Her eyes are the color of October. 

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brokenhearted11 commented on Emma the Flautist

08-16-2011

Angel; How'd I know this was right up your alley?

angelchaser

08/16/2011

how is this right up my alley?

brokenhearted11

08/16/2011

idk, it just seems like something you'd like.

brokenhearted11

08/16/2011

more so than most of my poetry, I mean.

angelchaser

08/16/2011

Honey, I love ALL your poetry. I still say you're a better poet than I am :)

brokenhearted11

08/16/2011

Argh! I still say I'm not. If anything, I've been decreasing in talent. I believe i hit a high note along the "January Air" era, and am now losing sight of who I am as a poet. It's saddening.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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title coming soon... or not I HAVE NO TITLE sorry oh wait nobody's reading this 1
Rachel's Sonnet 1
Daddy's Liquor (The Trigger Poem) 2
Now 1
Emma the Flautist 1
Ana Thoughts 0
Peristalsis 0
Late At Night... 0
The Calm Before the Storm 3
The _____, the Whole _____, and Nothing But the _____ 0
Estival Grins 2
On The Way 0
Sympathetic 0
Just Remember 1
Track Star 1
OW! 2
Pinball Screams 2
Something About Fragility 2
Slamming Doors and Sleepless Nights 4
This Side of Heartbreak 1
Black Lace Ribbon 2
I Need a Can of Paint 3
14 Stories Up 2
Last Summer 3
Sardonic Words 4
Cold Tile 4
Blackberry Fingers 4
Trick of the Lights... 4
Dancing Mind 5
January Air 8
Sunday Morning 4
Chase Me 8
Almost Suicide 4
Falling Flat 3
Float 7
Collapse 4
Too Old to be Young, Too Young to be Old 3
The Blare of the Band 1
A Dream that Passed 1
Hope to Hope 2
Knife 1
Be Okay 1
2 Missed Texts 2
Wasn't Dreaming 1
Screw Normal 1
Lacking Mind 1
Too Much to Bear Alone 1
Happy... Again. 1
The Back of Your Mind 1
Let the Water Take Me 5
Do You Ever... 3
Your Kiss 3
Love 5
Put It Down Child 9
Causing Me Harm 5
I Miss You 7
To Be a Kid 7
I Must 12
Makai 10
You Try 2
She 5
My Own Person 2
Fear + Anger = Power 3
"A Cycle" OR "Cut" 3
Meow 1
Goodbye 2
He is Fire 2
A Whisper in the Night 2
I Try 2
Clichés and Stereotypes 6
Not Him 1
Truth 2
Time 1
SNAP or EVERY DAY 0
Gone 0
Pretending 1
All the Help You can Get 1
I Loved You 2
Burdens 1
Fear 2
I Know Not 1
Never Ever 1
Understanding 1
Art 1
The Ocean is Part of the Healing 1
My Heart 1
I Know That Heart 2
"His Fault" 2