Slamming Doors and Sleepless Nights

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Slamming Doors and Sleepless Nights

The car door shut hard.

I heard it come crashing through the night,
disrupting the once peaceful fog, 
and coming to a rest on my bedside table.

She took a drag off her cigarette.

The smoke drew a think veil of despair  
across the ever darkening, cloudless sky.
Her words were slurred, his were flat.

They drew such a swift blade.

Yelling fights tangoed through the kitchen,
water boiling in the kettle screamed.
It pierced the argument like tack on balloon.

A slap was heard.

Such a spiteful sound it created, so echoing.
It primed the ears for the car engine revving. 
The wall shone with headlights, and they disappeared.

She hid in the closet.

She waited for the loud to go away,
quivering with the sobs of a work out kid.
Mommy came in, picked her up. 

Bedtime.

She was so tired of the door slams
and nights of no sleep.
Couldn't they just go away for once?

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DeepEclipse commented on Slamming Doors and Sleepless Nights

03-10-2011

Things like this make you appreciate peace and quiet all over again. Forced to be part of something you want no part of. I like how you spoke the first stanza. As if the sound physically came through the window and sat on the table, bothering your peace.

brokenhearted11

03/10/2011

that's exactly how i meant it, deep. thanks!

sk8erpoet commented on Slamming Doors and Sleepless Nights

03-09-2011

this is amazing.thats pretty much all i can say..i mean there is so much emotion in it...i love it..great write..sk8

brokenhearted11

03/09/2011

broken appreciates it(:

CasperB commented on Slamming Doors and Sleepless Nights

03-03-2011

DAAAAAMN! This is so vivid and detailed, it literally grabbed me and dragged me in, details like yours is so rare to see in such a young person. Keep it up because I loved this poem

brokenhearted11

03/03/2011

thank you! i love great comments like this, the ones that seem real. haha again, thanks.

brokenhearted11 commented on Slamming Doors and Sleepless Nights

03-02-2011

*WORN out kid, not WORK out kid(:

CasperB

03/03/2011

10/10 for me :)

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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